In the event, there was little for them to say,
The flowers, so they stood still, swaying,
Not even murmuring amongst themselves.
Meanwhile my mother’s funeral rose up in me
Like a volcano.
They clung to the soil and the rock
For dear life, the flowers, while far below
Suspended like a miracle in infinite space
The sun, too, clung on for dear life—
So small, hot, and bright!
Each flower, surely, had its petaled meaning:
Bridal and Christmas Rose, Red and White Clover,
Meadow Saffron, varieties of Geranium and Thrift.
But on that day, as I recall, they said
Nothing to the point.
A poem could have stopped then and there
Like a cut flower, like a vase
For cut flowers, like a cut glass vase
Glittering—the human element—
In the hot, bright light.
But from the garden where we stood, I participated
In a greater miracle: the earth, all flowers
And volcanoes, was whipping the sun
Around and around in circles, around, around,
Like a child’s toy.
Image: Children’s drawing the flowers and the sun, published at torange.biz under a Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International (CC BY 4.0) license.
Inspired by a prompt from NaPoWriMo, where (just like here) it is Day 11.
Remarkable poem
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Thank you.
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Oh my, this is brilliant
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I am glad you like it!
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So powerful. I want to keep on savouring this but don’t want to spoil it by over-analysing it. Thank you.
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Thanks. Though if there’s anyone *less* likely to spoil a work by analyzing it…
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